方韩大战始末(二十二) 蒙人的“写作”表演 作者:安芃

韩寒在他的博客文章《超常文章一篇》中说:“《三重门》这么书在创作过程中,坐在我前后左右东南西北中发白的同学们都知道是什么情况,我几乎是写一页给要好的同学们传看一页的,尤其是我的同桌陆乐,他是从第一页看着我写到最后一页的。”

 

 

对此,我们前面已经说过,这样的写作方式,看起来不象在写作,更象是为了展示他在“写作”而进行的一种“写作”表演。

 

那么,究竟韩寒的这种“写作”方式是真正的写作还是一种“写作”表演呢?

 

2012327日,方舟子发布新浪博客文章《韩寒的同学证实〈三重门〉“手稿”是抄稿》,揭示了事实真相。

 

让我们按照时间的顺序来理一理事情的脉络。

 

先看看《三重门》书稿究竟是什么时候完成的。

 

韩老爹仁均在《儿子韩寒》一书中说,韩寒是从进入松江二中读高一(19989月)后不久开始创作《三重门》的,到1999年二三月份,小说已经进入尾声了(按照韩仁均的说法,《三重门》的创作期只有六到七个月)。19993月,韩寒获得新概念作文大赛一等奖。4月,韩寒将书稿订正一遍后送到萌芽编辑部,主编赵长天将书稿推荐给一家出版社。半年后,该出版社退稿。12月,赵长天将书稿推荐给作家出版社的袁敏,后来由作家出版社出版。

 

然而,韩仁均在这里又撒谎了,其实《三重门》书稿结稿时间比韩仁均在《儿子韩寒》一书中说的还要早。

 

根据上海文艺出版社总编辑郏宗培接受土豆网采访时的说法,《三重门》是韩仁均通过《故事会》副总编吴伦推荐给他的。(郏宗培讲述素材  http://www.tudou.com/albumplay/oPAMqYnaOyY/pGmydxEealk.html

 

吴伦原来住在上海金山区,与韩仁均相识。韩仁均是《故事会》的作者,几次获得《故事会》的创作奖,而《故事会》是上海文艺出版社出的刊物,所以韩仁均将《三重门》书稿经由《故事会》副总编吴伦推荐给上海文艺出版社合情合理。

 

郏宗培在接受土豆网采访时当场给在外地出差的吴伦打了电话,吴伦确认了郏宗培的说法,即《三重门》是由他交给郏宗培的。这个说法有郏吴两人互证,证据确凿。

 

 

上海文艺出版社总编辑郏宗培在采访中当场打电话给吴伦

 

《三重门》书稿在上海文艺出版社审了两个月后,写了修改意见退给韩仁均。郏宗培很肯定地说,在他们审查《三重门》书稿时,韩寒还没有获得新概念作文大赛一 等奖,因为当时韩寒获奖是很轰动的一件事,新概念作文大赛结果一出来他就知道了,但在他们审查《三重门》书稿时,并没有韩寒获奖的信息。

 

 

郏宗培采访中

 

也就是说,上海文艺出版社退稿的时间决不会晚于19993月底(韩寒作文大赛获奖在1999328日),按书稿审了两个月算,他们收到《三重门》书稿的时间最晚也在19991月,也即19991月时《三重门》已结稿完成了。

 

比照郏宗培和韩仁均的说法,韩寒写《三重门》的时间是从19989月以后到19991月,实际上只有四个多月的时间。

 

一个高一学生,四个多月的时间(还包括上课作业踢球读《二十四史》《管锥编》等在内)就完成一部二十多万字的小说,韩寒,神人啊。

 

所以,谎话连篇的韩仁均在这里又撒谎了,他故意把《三重门》的结稿时间推迟了两个月,以便给假想的韩寒创作《三重门》增加两个月的时间。

 

现在我们知道,《三重门》书稿最晚在19991月就已经结稿完成了。

 

那么,让我们再看看韩寒在同学们面前表演“写作”是在什么时候吧。

 

韩寒第一个高一是在19989月至19996月,他的同学朱莲,陆乐曾接受过土豆网采访,让我们看看朱莲的说法(朱莲讲述素材下http://www.tudou.com/albumplay/oPAMqYnaOyY/INe-vQgU5Sw.html):

 

 

 

 

朱莲采访之一

 

 

朱莲采访之二

 

综上所述,我们可以得出很明确的结论:《三重门》书稿最晚在19991月就已经完成,而韩寒的“写作”表演从19993月新概念作文大赛之后才开始,而这个表演到19996月还没有完成。

 

所以,韩寒在教室里高调“写作”《三重门》,只是一种欲盖弥彰的表演,他写完给同学传阅的,只能是抄稿,不可能是原稿。

 

等到韩寒手稿出版以后,我们还会看到更多更搞笑的证据,且听下回分解。

 

(待续)

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韩寒留级的高一语文老师李厚德的实话实说

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韩寒留级的高一语文老师李厚德的实话实说:韩寒上个学期中考语文是67分,大考是50分;作文题目是《我的追求》,要求800字,他写了200字。如果他能用200个字写出800个字要表达的内容,那这篇文章会是很好的文章,可是他没能表达出来;比如说上学期语文大考,一篇课外文言文,他一个字都不写,你说这20分我能给他吗?他说没时间,但他提前交卷。我在门口跟他说,韩寒你为什么不全做好?他说我不做了,他说没意思。韩寒,我们要实话实说,情况就是这样子的。

所以我还是相信松江二中存在有师德的老师。至于为什么松江二中会那样集体沉默这么多年,就好比现在的方舟子被全网禁言一样。某些势力真的很可怕。

第九届“西部杯

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第九届“西部杯”上海市青少年计算机应用操作竞赛动画制作决赛名单

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上海市第九届“西部集团杯”青少年计算机应用操作竞赛
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组 别 区 县 学    校 姓  名

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高中组 松江区 松江二中 陆乐

二等奖

 

此“陆乐”是否就是韩寒口中的所谓同桌?骗子的移花接木道术多了,这种穿越的把戏未尝不会做。

这明显就是一个此地无银三百两、一种欲盖弥彰的自欺欺人的把戏

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这明显就是一个此地无银三百两、一种欲盖弥彰的自欺欺人的把戏。可是“做”过了头,相反露出了狐狸的尾巴。“今日说法”曾报道过一个案例:一个女煤老板被杀。调查另一个煤老板时,他本人以及家人供述其案发时间段竟惊人的一致。就是根据这一点,引起了办案人员的警觉,他们反觉得这样不正常,显然是在掩盖什么。正是根据这一点最终锁定了他。-------作家写书,有像韩寒那样创作的吗?-------写一张给人家看一张。这明显的不正常。今天看来,他是在实施和掩盖一个惊天的骗局。现已证实,他当初的写作秀,实际上就是代笔门其中的一个环节,玩儿的就是移花接木的勾当。而这个此地无银三百两自欺欺人的鬼把戏,也更加锁定了他代笔的真实性。

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